Send me a draft!

Whether you feel stuck, or you think it’s the greatest thing ever written, I can help. I will give you a new perspective (or three). I will deliver actionable, intelligent, industry-grade feedback. And above all, I will put my finger on the main thing holding this draft back from being the greatest thing ever written.

What I know best?

My specialties are: structure, character arcs, plot, dialogue, loglines, theme, and style. I have a unique approach to story, drawn from ancient mythology as much as contemporary writing guides.

What genres do I cover?

If you’ve seen my youtube videos then you know I love sci-fi and fantasy, but I know my way around just about every major genre. Send me your teen comedies, hard-boiled thrillers, post-apocalyptic rom-coms, mind/body horror, Neoplatonist musicals, Babylonian gangster films, Lovecraftian murder mysteries, Gnostic fairy tales, and dramas. I’m a fan of popcorn flicks but also an aficionado of modernist literature.

Bottom line: whatever you’re going for, I’ll greet your project on its own terms.

Why me?

I live and breathe story. I’ve given notes on over 1500 feature films and hundreds of TV pilots, short films, and short stories. I do this for a living—but I also live to do this.

Want to move forward?

Hit the “Contact” button in the top right.

In your e-mail:

Tell me the format (Feature script? First chapter?), the page length of your draft, what size notes you’re looking for (see the options below), and ask any questions.

Looking forward to collaborating!